Requesting Feedback

Description

I am working on a series of videos that highlight all the different merchants and ways you can spend PIV. This is the first one and will be used as a template going forward.
I am starting with the Youtube Short version, which is by nature shorter. I will be working on the full 1920x1080 version next, which I may make a bit longer to highlight some reviews and exact perks of Travala and insert Merchant name here.

Feedback Due Date

Youtube Short: Friday Sept. 20th, 2pm PST
Youtube Full: TBD (WIP)

Links

Youtube Short:
https://youtube.com/shorts/_CeIFK67U7Q?feature=share

NEED FEEDBACK

Full version 1920X1080 (WIP)

I added Travala Website reviews and modified it a bit.
I need you guys to review for any mistakes or errors, please.

DO NOT share this publicly. It's a Work In Progress (WIP).

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=enG8RVmpqxw

GREAT NEWS!
After @LeacyMcK shared this (below attached) with the Travala team, they loved it and will promote it once we put it out there. This is a huge win on our part and hopefully theirs - benefiting both parties in marketing and hopefully showing our other vendors that we treat our partners/vendors very well.